Now that is very good , though it still could do with a bit of work.
Erhm, if I may give a few comments ^^;;;; :
-Please try to cut down the drum-basin(not sure if this is the correct word for it)a little just after the beginning as it overshadows the other instruments a touch too much.
-Perhaps you could set the flutes a touch louder?
-Just a though, but maybe you you should consider adding (if you have the sound files) an ocarina to the flutes and a second string instrument to the guitar section?
I'm really glad you're doing such a good job though, thank you very much.