bombshelboy

so its been a while since I posted, can I get a little more feedback lovelies (everyone)?

So...punchy kick...what that mean ? Sorry, not really familiar with the term. I still need to work on the metroid 1 brinstar notes, I am doing them all by ear and I know they are a bit off, but I haven't quite nailed it yet...I'm gonna get my friend who is particularly good at note descrimination to help out with it because I'm a bit lost to tell you the truth . The little sound effects added in the part after the death sound aren't quite done, actually I just barely added them and they definitely need work, I'm gonna have a little almost breakbeat made out of samus sound sampling...you'll enjoy, I swearz. Besides all that, I'm thinking of completely re-vamping the drums for the intro and metroid 1 sections. They seem kinda stale or repetetive. I'm also gonna be dropping a couple of audio tracks over the top, vocoded, for descriptions of metroid beings as per a suggestion I recieved from a friend. If anyone else has a good suggestion please tell me, I want this mix to be win.

Sorry about the double post, but I fixed a bunch of inconsistencies in the song, its very polished right now...if you have heard older versions, please listen to the new one

I have an update ready, but googlepages is down...I'll update once its fixed Updated song: http://bombshelboy.googlepages.com/metroidmix.mp3

The keys are intentionally off from the original...its not a midi, I wrote the notes from my head til it sounded close...I wanted a diminished feel...

So...I need some harder kicking beats, a counter melody (like I like making arpaggioes..and those are usually good counters), maybe some sampling from game as a melody? Anyone else have ideas? I'll post a newer version after a little work...thanks for the help so far though!

Hey everyone...I wanna submit this one song...but I'm not sure how good it is, like because its hard to critique your own music...so any feedback is welcome...please let me know what you think http://bombshelboy.googlepages.com/metroidmix.mp3