dubbelmoral Posted May 19, 2008 Share Posted May 19, 2008 http://rapidshare.com/files/116150661/Phantom_Ice_Cream_Truck_Drive-By.mp3.html Rough mix for now, I apologize if the overall levels are too low. I haven't done any mastering to it yet. Enjoy! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaybell Posted May 20, 2008 Share Posted May 20, 2008 Herbie Hancock now what are you doing here Okay, so at around 1:50 everything starts sounding very cluttered and stuff. That hihat or whatever sample is seriously cluttering things and annoying. Before you had a nice groove going which personally I was diggin' quite a bit, though it was REALLY repetitive, the arrangement is more or less a cover, and it had some seriously not great samples, which is usually something really bad. The problem is that the repetitivity and the bad sample-itude actually kind of sort of adds to it? I have no idea if that was intentional on your part or not. It definitely would not fly with the judges: super conservative arrangement, meh samples. These are the main problems until 1:50 - ish, where you don't reference the source ever, and everything is very cluttered and boring and repetitive. It loses the groove of before and just starts gettin' annoying. Especially that ever present guitar. It is just not interesting at all after that point. Given that to most it likely wouldn't even be that interesting before then, you may want to do some serious overhaulin' if you wanna make this passable. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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