JonahB Posted May 24, 2008 Share Posted May 24, 2008 Hey everyone! I've been a lurker here for awhile, but I had no reason to sign up until now. I finally managed to (almost) finish a song! All the effort put into screwing with software/hardware, reading mixing tutorials, ect. is finally starting to show. I put a good bit of time into this. Its not done yet, vocals still haven't been recorded. You can kinda hear how they'll fit in, though. Unfortunately I'm a horrible singer so if anyone is interested in recording the vocals for me (or knows where I can find someone), let me know. I know the flow of the song is a little weird, but hopefully I'll get better at that in the future. I'm also thinking of rewriting the lyrics, as they don't really fit the mood of the song at all (up until the end, atleast). Constructive criticism is more than welcome. -download- http://www.websamba.com/GameCircle/servility.mp3 -mirror- http://www.2shared.com/file/3334711/3f05adc1/servility.html -lyrics- after dawn, his time will be decreed rewarded with gold, planting a seed scalded for less, scalded for play but who should care, its for his own good anyway... and time... fades into a cold blank life that the rest of the world chose for you we're disconnected after noon, numbness here to stay he'll no longer question because he can't see any other way slave to gold, future of certainty desensitized, he'll accept servility and time... fades into a cold blank life that the rest of the world chose for you we're disconnected he's materialistic, he'll blindly obsess without deeper meaning, or a soul to express he wants everything passing the sights, on with the race without color, without face servility servil-ityyyyyy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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