La Yinn's "Psychadelic"

[La_Yinn]

Hello there,

I recently made quite a controversial track in my opinion. The first track I ever made that includes vocals. I would like some feedback on the track. Tell me what you liked, what you didn't like, what would be a cool addition, some mastering tips etc.

So far, I've been told about these flaws:

- It does not include a chorus. (That's me being a lazy arse, really. :3)

- The end gets sightly repetitive.

- The acid synth midway is poorly mastered.

The link to the track is http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/239730

I would appreciate it if anybody could give it a listen. :- )

~ La_Yinn, --'