hallfprice Posted December 11, 2009 Share Posted December 11, 2009 So, just got the ol' NO to this mix, and was looking for some feedback as to how I could improve it. From the rejection: First off, this was really quiet. Second, the production didn't fill out the sound spectrum very well, and the leads were muted and played very rigidly. Those issues make this a NO, but the arrangement itself had some cool ideas. The blend of jazz piano runs and harder synths was cool. With the right production, it would be a lot stronger. Vinnie Prabhu OverClocked ReMix There are several common reasons why submissions might not make it to OCR's next stage of evaluation (bolded & italicized if applicable to this submission): the arrangement is merely a MIDI or game music format file assigned new instruments and/or given added effects the arrangement is not different enough (e.g. structure, tempo, instrumentation) from the original game music the arrangement is too underdeveloped and/or too repetitive the sound quality (e.g. sample quality, sequencing, mixing, processing, recording) is poor the writing or performance quality (e.g. frequent clashing or wrong notes, mismatched key signatures, sloppy timing) is poor Sooo, this was my first ever serious attempt at a vgremix. How does one "fill out the sound spectrum" better? I used reason, and FL studio, but mostly reason. Thanks in advance.... Here is the source for anyone interested: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nabeel Ansari Posted December 12, 2009 Share Posted December 12, 2009 http://www.darkesword.com/read/essays/fourmancombo.txt For creating full sounding music (filling out the sound spectrum? Is that what you meant?) that's a good guide by Darkesword. I personally think you're lacking in terms of chords and the "pianist" (explained in the guide) part. The pianist doesn't have to be just a PIANO, it could be synth pads, or any other instrument that can play chords. Be creative xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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