WIP Song of Storms remix

[Paladin]

Hi guys, I'm working on a remix of Song of Storms from Zelda. I'd really appreciate some comments and suggestions! Thanks very much.

Alex.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/10999021/songofstormsremix4.mp3

[Cash]

Nice take on the Song of Storms. I have a few comments, keep in mind that I'm not literate in the technical aspects of music, but I hope my comments help.

1. The kicks are annoying and very distracting, too punchy and harsh. I would choose a different kick sample.

2. The bass that plays during the main melody from 0:34 and 1:44, and again at the end, is too intense and detracts from the lead instruments. Maybe bring up the low end a bit.

I like the direction you're heading in though, I'd say you're off to a good start.

[Paladin]

Awesome, thanks for the advice.