Answers in the Tides

[Ravich]

http://soundcloud.com/benandmusic/answers-in-the-tides

This is a piece I wrote several months back and, as usual, the further along a piece gets, the more stuck I get. Rather than letting it sit there, I thought I'd use it for something productive and get some feedback.

Any constructive criticism from the composition to the orchestration to the mix to the general use of the library/instruments is welcome.

Cheers!

[seagaia]

What was your starting vision for the piece/how has that evolved so far? I think that would help more with constructing feedback - in general I feel like your orchestration is done quite well and sounds realistic enough (at least the strings).

In terms of expanding...a rehash of the first half the song (where legato strings is backed by those rhythmic staccato strings), but maybe without the staccato strings...in order to transition elsewhere (unless you wish to keep the energy up throughout the piece)