River City Ransom (50's Greaser Style)

[Ghost Voltage]

yeah i know

[Cash]

This is a really catchy tune, I enjoyed this quite a bit. I like the intro a lot, it hooked me right away. The guitar fits well, and the piano was a nice touch. Nothing jumped out at me that I can complain about. I wish I could give more advice on where to take this next. I don't have much experience yet, but I'm learning.

[Ghost Voltage]

thanks! my beefs with it are the do-wop vocals i threw in there, i hadn't had any sleep and had smokers cough like a beast, but i just wanted to get it over with. that and i wanted it to sound more live, like it's being played in some greasy 50's Tennessee honky-tonk in the middle of a fist fight, if that makes sense. crowd noises and such.