short bossa nova track

[Calum]

Trying to get a sims vibe - i'd be interested in hearing what people's thoughts were on my production - i feel it's a little loose - i would love it to be a bit more tight. Also i think it's slightly under-tempo.

SO YEAH, LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK!

http://soundcloud.com/calumbowen/may-i-take-your-order-sir

[Dissidia]

Haha before I started the song I was like "du-du, dudu, du-duu" the tempo works imo.

Dunno what to say about production, but it has a nice warm feeling to it.

Cleverly named title too, makes me think about sitting outside in the sun with a parasol drink and a waiter comes up to me and asks me may I take your order?