jobro Posted April 12, 2012 Share Posted April 12, 2012 Here's a remix I've made for the Super Mario Bros Wii's under water levels. I hope you like it. http://soundcloud.com/johanbrodd/smb-wii-under-water-song Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calum Posted April 13, 2012 Share Posted April 13, 2012 Here's a remix I've made for the Super Mario Bros Wii's under water levels. I hope you like it.http://soundcloud.com/johanbrodd/smb-wii-under-water-song Good job - please post a link to the source! This is solid in terms of the instruments and sequencing however it seems to be quite conservative and repetitive - in that i'm pretty sure the whole piece just repeats once exactly. Perhaps consider varying dramatic levels - it all stays on this pretty calm and serene level with basically no percussion/drums. Everything about this is done well but it doesn't stand out or really grab my attention. Not that every piece should BUT i feel this is a little too conservative in interpretation, structure/dynamics, style/instrumentation. It's a great foundation but go wild - let your hair down! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jobro Posted April 13, 2012 Author Share Posted April 13, 2012 And with sources you mean my FL Studio project? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DusK Posted April 13, 2012 Share Posted April 13, 2012 And with sources you mean my FL Studio project? No, he means the track you remixed, which would be . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jobro Posted April 13, 2012 Author Share Posted April 13, 2012 Oh. OK... Thanks for clearing this out. This happens to noobs like me I suppose. Anyways I'm glad you like this remix. This track wouldn't be good if I went too far astray from the original track. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trinity Dragon Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 Good job - please post a link to the source! This is solid in terms of the instruments and sequencing however it seems to be quite conservative and repetitive - in that i'm pretty sure the whole piece just repeats once exactly. I tend to agree. I think if you took into an fully orchestral mode on the second time through, with some cymbals and some other percussion, it'd be a lot less repetitive. And don't be afraid to play with the source material some either. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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