Super Mario Bros Wii - Under water

[jobro]

Here's a remix I've made for the Super Mario Bros Wii's under water levels. I hope you like it.

http://soundcloud.com/johanbrodd/smb-wii-under-water-song

[Calum]

Here's a remix I've made for the Super Mario Bros Wii's under water levels. I hope you like it.

http://soundcloud.com/johanbrodd/smb-wii-under-water-song

Good job - please post a link to the source! This is solid in terms of the instruments and sequencing however it seems to be quite conservative and repetitive - in that i'm pretty sure the whole piece just repeats once exactly.

Perhaps consider varying dramatic levels - it all stays on this pretty calm and serene level with basically no percussion/drums.

Everything about this is done well but it doesn't stand out or really grab my attention. Not that every piece should BUT i feel this is a little too conservative in interpretation, structure/dynamics, style/instrumentation.

It's a great foundation but go wild - let your hair down!

[jobro]

And with sources you mean my FL Studio project?

[DusK]

And with sources you mean my FL Studio project?

No, he means the track you remixed, which would be

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[jobro]

Oh. OK... Thanks for clearing this out. This happens to noobs like me I suppose. Anyways I'm glad you like this remix. This track wouldn't be good if I went too far astray from the original track.

[Trinity Dragon]

Good job - please post a link to the source! This is solid in terms of the instruments and sequencing however it seems to be quite conservative and repetitive - in that i'm pretty sure the whole piece just repeats once exactly.

I tend to agree. I think if you took into an fully orchestral mode on the second time through, with some cymbals and some other percussion, it'd be a lot less repetitive. And don't be afraid to play with the source material some either.