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dang! Nice flute playing! and I love the background textures- really sparse, open, echoes, all lend well to that ruins feel. Don't know if I have a whole lot for constructive criticism, but I'll try-

the flute, again, is awesome, but maybe you could give it a slightly longer rest every now and again. once it gets going, it keeps your attention, but since it is mostly wandering around the chords, there isn't much of a "melody", or not one I can hear easily. that makes it almost tiresome to listen to for an extended period. So one idea could be to give it a 10+ second rest every so often, and throw a secondary melodic instrument in those sections- perhaps some dulcimer or zither sound sounds like it would fit, even just rolling around on a couple notes.

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