WIP: Pokémon Ruby/Sapphire - "Battle Among the Stars"

[electric concerto]

Hi all, here's a little something I started to try new things and concepts. It's a kinda trancy thing based on the Pokemon Battle Theme from the Ruby and Sapphire versions of Pokemon. All help and suggestions welcome!

http://www.e-concerto.net/music098273/pokemonwip.mp3

(not a complete ending yet, about 50% of the song, in fact, is started...)

[POCKETMAN]

I like this, very nice start.

[Theory of N]

It's nice, but it's kind of boring. It doesn't seem like there's much melody, and when there is, it's...well, not interesting.