Revenge of Shinobi "My Lover" Remix WIP

[Iapetus]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=671342

Newbie remixer here. "My Lover" from Revenge of Shinobi set to Rudyard Kipling's "If". Narrated by Martin Clifton.

[avaris]

Nice stuff dude. The narration in the beggining are too loud over the background. A cool thing to do might be to double the narration, and on the 2nd part put some delay so it will delay off all those 's' sounds. That could really add some flare. You could start only with the regular channel and as the narration keeps on goin in slowly work in the delayed version.

The song as is, is pretty repetative albeit good, so you'll need to include lots of little things to keep the listener's attention. The background strings could be a lil thicker IMO.

Def looking forward to an update on this one.

[Iapetus]

Thanks, avaris. How is the composition? Is it fresh enough so it doesn't feel like I am just hashing out the main melody throughout the piece?

[avaris]

In general the composition sounds great. Although if I were doing the mix I'd add in some drynamic variation in the composition to match the tone of the narrator's voice. When the narrator is saying something really serious give the composition more movement, expand it dynamically.