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This is some good stuff!

What if you were to try and have everything but the piano fade away starting at 1:33 which would lead into having the piano and scream'd strings the only things playing? Then you could bring some things fading back in, or a quick fade in to the heavy guitar.

Maybe during that quiet part you could bring in some more piano, letting it have a nice piece with thosoe strings backing.

I've always liked having a 'beautiful' part in a heavy song like this. Reminds me of Rob Dougan or a little bit of NiN.

You can take or leave these ideas. The song is really good the way it is, it just needs an outtro part. :)

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