Raptor: Call of the Shadows - First Steps

[Colth]

Hi,

This is basically my 2nd try for Video Games Music Remix and the 1st one to present to the community. And since it is my first VGMRemix I thought to post it in a really early state to get some feedback and see if I'm doing things right so I can fix things early...

At the moment I'm just glad I got the melody and stuff to sound right.

Now I can start the part with messing around.. add filler parts.. improvise.. effects.. additional voices... intro.. ending etc etc.

http://soundcloud.com/colth/really-early-work-in-progress

and in case someone doesn't know the game...:

This is the original track -

and this is the track during gameplay:

[Trinity Dragon]

I know this game. I love this game. And it's nice to see some mixing. Except it's too close to the source material, even as an early rendition.