Loss of Myself - FF9 Loss of Me / Rose of May

Creative title, I know I actually put down some time for this one so bring on the feedback! I Gotta hurry to school now. Enjoy.

http://tindeck.com/listen/pgyj

My only complaint would be the lack of dynamics throughout the entire piece. The lack of velocity control coupled with the rigid rhtyhm of the song makes it sound too mechanical for such a natural arrangement. However upon listening to the original version, I would have the same complaint about it. However I think a piano can get away with it where a flute cannot.

Overall, a very fun and lively adaptation with plenty of original elements.

Thank you Maybe I'm gonna play some with the dynamics tomorrow, it might make a really big difference.

It didn't turn out the way I imagined it to, so I will leave it as it is.

not a lot of variation in the arrangement, and quite a bit of direct repetition. don't be afraid to include some more original writing in your remixes.

drum patterns sound mechanical and have some odd rhythms that take the waltzy feel away from the tune. sequencing is a bit stiff and the samples could still use quite a bit of work in the realism department. not a bad effort, keep practicing and your craft will improve

Good tips, thank you