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[Super Mario World - Caslte VS. Bush Sr.]

File:

http://www.koori.eu/song/inprogress/Mario-bush1.mp3

Hi all,

I have this sound in my mind so I tried to remix it without sticking to my electro habits...

...so the result sound flat, I don't really like it, the problem is I don't know how to improve it (without going back to my electro style).

I m pretty sure that with your advises it can get better.

(Otherwise i'll just drop it and start from scratch).

Maybe I should just sing or rap on it ?