Thanks a ton guys. I don't like to think "im a noob so blahblahblah". I just like critizim on my stuff, this is my first actual "mix" of a song. I quote mix because I basicly ripped a midi and changed the instruments, then attempted to mix it. But yeah, now I know what I need to do to make my songs better.
Thief
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If someone could pm me with more tips, it would be appreciated.