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DarkMessenger

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  1. Hi there.

    I wrote this piece as a part of a soundtrack I'm going to write for a non-existent RPG.

    It's music for the intro movie

    Entrada

    I'll discribe what story the song should tell:

    King David comes in his throne room to welcom the knights of the oval table, that just came from war.

    His counselor comes in with very bad news. The villain Victor is on the loose again.....and even worse he is after the princes.

    Princes Chloe is taking a stroll at a lake somewhere in the kingdom.

    "Hé, whats that....a music box?" Then she gets caught by Victor and they move of into the dark forrest that lies beyond........

    Well that's more or less it. I could use some feedback on this, seeing that it is my first classical composition.

    But apart from that I hope you enjoy listening to it.

    Gr.,DarkM

  2. Hello there,

    The beginning is nice....

    I only have a bit of a problem with the (many) different styles. I mean when it's done as Mr.Bungle did in their early days it's cool to listen to.

    I think now it's more like your pasting a lot of things together in one song.

    Don't get me wrong, there is some pretty good stuff in there. I would cut it down to a few styles and not go all over the place.....I personally like the Van Halen sounding part....THAT ROCKS.

    Good luck,

    DarkM

  3. OH yeah.....

    I would like to play this live....I'm a pro percussionist and I'm searching for this kinda stuff.

    Maybe even record it for you....?????huh huh huh?????

    Well...I think I'll have to skip some notes though because I only use 4 sticks....ah what ever!!! :)

    Let me know what you think, maybe you could send me midi file or something.

    DarkM

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