Yeah, you have no idea how much I get that when people listen to my pieces...
The section from 1:08 to 1:28, I dislike. I'm not sure what to do with it, but I don't want to take it out because it is part of the source material. I was thinking maybe a low-key interval with brass playing the melody; give it a sinister feel. Do you have any ideas on where I can get a good brass. The brass I'm using can't do the job I'm afraid.