Seth Essington

I revised the lead a little bit, it has the feel of the first draft. Right now, I am trying to focus mostly on the lead of the song and when I get that down, I will then focus on the other stuff.

Should I have the same arp. as before and make the lead more audible like I did on the new one? I changed the arp. a little on the new one.

I'm sorry for being rude, but you spelled "hear" wrong. lol.

I updated the file. The lead tune is easier hear in the arpeggiated notes and that is really all I changed.

I think maybe since I made the song, I'm the only one who can hear the melody because I can hear the melody perfectly fine. But, I re-did the lead and will be uploading soon.

Thats the link to download is below. Anyway, how is the track? Is there anything I can improve on? Version Three is the most updated. VERSION ONE VERSION TWO VERSION THREE - Currently revised

It's kinda hard to remix some of those considering some of them are less than a minute long.