First off, sorry if this isn't in the right place... I looked over the rules, but didn't read every single little bit, so I may have missed something, but this appears to be the right spot... 
Anyway, I have a remix that I made that I would like some feedback on. It's the first remix I have ever made, but I don't think I did too horribly badly on it. 
http://files.filefront.com/STARDestructionmp3/;10136614;/fileinfo.html 
I need all the tips I can get here. I made that using FL Studio 8. At one point I opened a midi of the original song to see what the right notes for it were, but I didn't directly copy anything over. 
I don't think I am completely finished with it, but if I get enough positive feedback, I am going to work pretty hard to get this to be as good as I can. If not, I'll just cut my losses and move on.  
Thanks in advance!