ladyspritzy
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Okay, I'm not so hot at the whole music-making-on-the-computer thing (since I've never done so) but I do know what I like.I like the new opening. It's just as good at the last one, and I don't think it needs much, if any, improvement.At 1:48, I think it sounds just a little abrupt, but maybe that's just me.The whole thing from 3:34 to about 5:12 is still pretty good, but I liked it when the drum could be heard more. Also, the harpsicord (or at least, the thing that kinda sounds like one) is a little random in when it plays. If you could make it a litle more regular, and maybe make compete with the piano less, taht'd be cool.But of course, that's just me, and I write more than I make music.
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Thaw
A desperate cry, unyielding ice
Another’s war over meaningless dispute
Cold, alone, fear frozen in bone
Heartless moon, hidden sun
Bronze sunset, and frozen chill
Drip- quiet fun: a warm, damp breeze
Water over stone, the playful trickle
Calm mind and easy pleasures
A subtle beat, a background hum
The happy hymn of hydro
While the leak continues to grow
Uncertain chimes across rimy dunes
Solid blocks, shifting snow
A frigid desert of frost
Windblown awe, silent respect
While the firmness cracks and breaks
Slow at first: a bird waking up
Then bursting to life it rushes forward
The flurry of unbound joy
The cyclone of battle, the frostbitten spray
Fields of freeze kicked up and dispersed
Sound stolen by the powdery plain
A frightened pause, a silent suspension
The winds steal across the ice-locked lands
Shatter- the maelstrom returns, the eye flees
Hailstorm of anger, terror, and confusion
Whips and stings with burning icefire
A whirlwind of life, the happy chaos
Down to the hidden, benevolent liquid
Procession of praise, dances of exhilaration
Ordered and excited, bursts of wild glorification
Parade of peace, triumphant march
The beauty of water unmatched and unstopped
Perplexing exultation, shower of bliss
Turbulent rush of impulsive waves
Surge of flexible, beautiful power
Trickle away to the darkest corners
Stealing off for freedom and solitude
Out of the gleeful mist freeze and fluid meet
Twins, similar and analogous
Intolerable and competitive, rivaling siblings
Clash of minds, confrontation of difference
A furious, squalling brawl, a duet of violent fate
Sweet, compromised turmoil
Two descending to one
Gorgeous dance of concession
Convergence of the identical adversaries
Abandoned and combined
Fused intellect and amalgamated spirit
Duo of singular intent
Flood.
Okay, quickie note, this isn't quite based off the most recent version: rather, it's based off the version right before my first post. Hope you still enjoy!
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thank you.
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okays, noob here asking a quesiton: if the song in question is on youtube, you can make a link to it and it'd be fine, right?
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i like it. though it kinda jumps from one music genre to another (eg from a very jazzy feel at the begining to a very strained and epic-battle-ish sound in the middle) it does so in a very smooth and polished way, making the song exiting. it could almost be the theme song to a movie or something else.
i'm tempted to write a poem inspired by this. would you mind?
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wow. i can't stop listening to it. my dad loves jazz music, and so i listen to it quite a bit. makes me feel like i'm in a quiet cafe listening to a quiet trio (or quartet, not quite sure which, in this case) in the background. really well done.
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I'm soooo sorry to hear that... i know what losing a grandpa is like. you needs a over-the-web huh (jumps up, and glomps you)
Oh, and on topic with the song, i love it. tempted to make it bgm for an audio drama (could I have your permission for that? I know that sounds kinda wierd...) the dynamics are great, the transitions seemless, and the piece is overall gorgeous. I quietly disagree with all the people thinking that is needs more brassy instuments, because those create more of a lively/friendly sound, and that would clash with the overall piece. all-in-all, (bursts out crying, since i'm not in class now) I LOVE IT! (sorry, went fangirl for a second there. but I don't retract my statement.)