I see what you're saying. I agree really, and I would, if i find the time to rerecord the guitar.
Thank you for the hope. I will add more. At the time of posting I had been working on the track for about an hour, and hadn't gotten around to any of the good stuff, just getting the base ideas down.
I was going to wait until the end, but I'll work on it now, rather than later. In any case, I'm already removing a second layered guitar i had under the first that I thought was cool, but in the end it just muddies it up and makes it clip.
That's all there is (except for a small synth part in the beginning. Oh, it's all standard tuning too.
This song started out as an original, and about halfway into the thinking process I found it cool to do it as a remix. That's why the first minute and a half are "original." As far as adding more, I was planning to.
I don't have a bass, and wouldn't know how to write a good bass line, or making it sound real enough. I can add a simple one, but no guarantee it'll be any good. If anyone out there would like to do some bass for me, I'm all for it.
Another thing I falter in. I'm absolutely ignorant at this point in all this drum-wise. I just use something simple for me to play against. I'll try what you suggested, but honestly It'd be better if I get some more in depth consultation on this, or perhaps if someone actually wrote/recorded/programmed it for me.
Well thank you man. Great feedback, and I'll definitely try to liven it up.