I've only got done the buildup part, later on, this becomes a fast-paced techno song. Anyways, I wanted to know if this needs something else, I feel it's missing something, even though it's supposed to be quiet in the beginning. Should I add some percussion? Something else? Leave it as is?
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/270109/72834_SoM.mp3
EDIT: This is a WIP, sorry if I confused you!