Hiya all, thank you so much for the feedback thus far, especially Ambient, your elevator remix is fantastic!
I'm reworking it considerably at the moment, adding variations on the melody and bass layers at the moment, and the overall length of the remix will probably be shortened for the next WIP (and eventual submission), as even though DnB tracks tend to be around the 6 minute mark, it is demanding to ask for 6 minutes of critique, not to mention the file size as kindly pointed out to me by Geeky Stoner
I'm considering adding a kind of "downbeat" layer on the precussion mid-tune to break the drum layers up a bit, but thats proving tricky with the overall adrenaline-rush of the original. I'll hopefully have an updated WIP online in the next few days