[My Originals: Looking for Critique]

Thank you Gario, I wish you could have listened to more than the first minute, so you could hear everything else I added to it x3; I'm glad you noticed the shimmery sound, I was really happy when I added that in there, I loved what it did to the song.

And Malbu, your ears can't be untrained, you I -really like- the ideas you gave in your post.

So I've taken everything into consideration, and yeah, I think... instead of getting rid of the drums (at least in the beginning) I'm going to work on them and have them gradually lead up to the main riffs at about 2:30.

And I definitely need to tune the harp down xD

I noticed it did cause a lot of sound clip in a lot of spots actually, and the strings that come in as soon as the song starts seem to almost completely fade away when the rest of the song starts. And I don't want that, so I need to adjust volumes for sure.

You two just helped me a lot, I hope you know

[First song in FL]

Definitely not bad for a first track.

But please, get Nexus. Nexus is gooooooood.

[My Originals: Looking for Critique]

I'm quite new to using FL studio, but I've started making my own tracks that I want to create my own "video game like" soundtrack out of.

I've tried to get listeners and help elsewhere, but that simply didn't work xD;

I'd love some advice <3

One I recently made (video may still be processing):

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FfTj7XWCYbU

[So...would it be alright if:]

I posted some of my music here as youtube links for people to look at and critique for me? I'm quite new at using FL studio, but a lot of my music is either ambient, or it sounds like it's from a video game soundtrack.

I've joined a few other forums and posted some of my music elsewhere and, well...heh...people weren't so pleased xD; Not just because of my music, but for me just simply asking for this.

But I feel like I could get some help here, especially with the songs I want to show.

Anyone interested?