Thank you Gario, I wish you could have listened to more than the first minute, so you could hear everything else I added to it x3; I'm glad you noticed the shimmery sound, I was really happy when I added that in there, I loved what it did to the song.
And Malbu, your ears can't be untrained, you I -really like- the ideas you gave in your post.
So I've taken everything into consideration, and yeah, I think... instead of getting rid of the drums (at least in the beginning) I'm going to work on them and have them gradually lead up to the main riffs at about 2:30.
And I definitely need to tune the harp down xD
I noticed it did cause a lot of sound clip in a lot of spots actually, and the strings that come in as soon as the song starts seem to almost completely fade away when the rest of the song starts. And I don't want that, so I need to adjust volumes for sure.
You two just helped me a lot, I hope you know