ok, ty for the review, the fisrst one link is already corrected
i did notice that it was extremely "mechanichal", but i had no clue why or how to change it, so thank god some1 FINALLY told me something
and there's one thing i didnt notice when i made both songs. i had the pc eq on, so when i made the eq on the song, it was fine for MY pc, not for everyone's else, as i noticed when i listened to the song on a friends pc