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  1. I made a little piano interpretation of Metal Gear Solid 2's Skateboarding track. I'm not a real piano player, though.

    I decided to write it one evening to kinda challenge myself, wish I could actually play the piano! :P

    Anyway, I'd love to hear what you guys think about the track in terms of what it lacks/what's cool in it. :)

    Arrangement: http://soundcloud.com/im-limit-break/3-records-of-a-soldier-mgs2

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  2. Production isn't as strong though. Most instruments sound very mechanical, especially the guitar. Piano sounds very mechanical in its small solo section too...

    Yeah, that might be because there's actually no post production yet, I wrote this sketch very fast, and with a different computer than mine, so I had to leave post-production behind and focused on the development of the track only.

    I'll post produce and continue it on my computer as soon as I get home!

  3. After a long time of silence, here I am, back on ocr forums!

    I'm the guy who attempted production a couple of years ago by writing two Final Fantasy arrangements as a start, but they really weren't so good...

    (You can find them here [FFVIII] and here [FFX])

    I eventually left production behind for a while, but lately I started studying and applying it very seriously.

    The following is a little sketch of a Zelda rearrangrment I wrote in the last two days. It's much higher level from my previous productions, but there's still much job to do... So I'd love to hear what you guys think about this sketch!

    You can find it here: http://soundcloud.com/im-limit-break/deus-ex-machina-song-of-storms

  4. Your advices are all precious, thanks guys

    I think I'll start by composing music I'd like to listen to, like SnappleMan said, and also experiment other genres when I get good at producing music.

    I don't want to learn to produce music for economical purposes...

    The reason why I want to make music is to spread messages all around the world in a language we all understand :)

  5. Hey everybody, I've got a question for you

    How did you figure out your music genre?

    I'm attracted by alot of music genres and listen many of them all the time.

    Now that I finally have the time,I want to start composing/remixing... but I don't know which genre to use.

    How did you choose yours?

  6. I love this source. My main trouble was with the piano (and whistle actually) being out of time. Whenever you play the ending phrase on the piano the one that goes A G F - semiquaver, semiquaver, quaver. Ugh, I wish you could embed sound or notation QUICKLY and easily. anyway, yeah, that phrase always sounds out of time and unconfident are you playing it in? If so quantise that part. The whole piano sounds just a tiny bit unconfident and at times a bit loose whilst the part is very staccato and needs to be in time.

    Whilst i've never submitted anything and really haven't posted an Remixes here I wouldn't suggest posting something you're not confident will get through just to show you're here. That'll probably get you a bad rep.

    I think you could add some drums to this - make them quite subtle but that might give it some energy - i would put them in perhaps halfway through at a new section.

    Also if you're stuck for new material on this piece as you have only really changed up the instruments a bit. I'd suggest just playing the melody and seeing if anything else fits or do the opposite, play the accompaniment and see if you can fit a different melody over the top. try and expand on the melody or write a new section in the same kind of style as thunder plains.

    These are my suggestions.

    Thanks for your advices :)

    The problem is that my laptop's not enough powerful to add more things to this piece, but I'm planning to get some new hardware, so I'll review it completely after I'll buy my new pc.

    I wouldn't suggest posting something you're not confident will get through just to show you're here. That'll probably get you a bad rep.

    Damn, I was so optimistic and naive I didn't even consider that xD

    I guess you're right, this is not the right one to begin with! (at least, for now..)

  7. So I made up a few changes again, I softered the piano like Rozovian suggested me, and I added a fully wet-reverbered piano on the back.

    I made some minor changes on the whistle too, and I increased the master volume, wich was too low before.

    In some parts the piano and the whistle are still playing in unison, I haven't find an alternative melody yet, plus, it looks like I'm really near to the limit of my laptop's capacities, and you might notice that if you listen to the song carefully.. I wanted to add more things, like atmospherical effects sounds ('cause it's the Thunder Plains!) but I need a more powerful computer to do so.

    The big lack in this one is that it's not really well-mastered, I've learnt so many things in a little time, but mastering is still kinda unkown to me (compressors and other stuffs, I'm just able to use equalizers xD).

    This might sound you crazy, but I'm seriously thinking about submitting this one, although it's a 99% it will get a *NO*, it's still a good way to let the judges read my name at least once, 'cause I'll come back with better ReMixes until I'm not part of you OCReMixers!

    Link: http://tindeck.com/listen/vuip

  8. Lower the velocity on the piano for a softer sound (unless that's a single velocity-layer piano, in which case get a better one). The parts where the piano and whistling play in unison... shouldn't. I'd either change one of them to play a different melody entirely (probably something backing-y) or have them alternate playing the current melody and being backing for the other instrument.

    Interesting idea, decent start. Keep it up. :D

    I felt there was something wrong in the piano velocity, but I wasn't so sure, now that you confirmed that, I'll definitely lower it!

    The piano & whistle unison is the proof of my low level skills in this field, infact I never thought of alternating them, I must try that out!

    Thanks for your advices, Sir :)

  9. This might be the last update to my first attempted rearrangement, I don't have neither the skill, nor the knowledge to complete it in a good way, but I spent some hours on it, rebuilt it all by using the little skills I have acquired in these late months!

    Imma leave this project like this for a long time I guess, 'cause I have other simpler projects in my mind right now!

    The next one will be another FF8 track rearrangement, I think!

    Source:

    Link: http://tindeck.com/listen/ewch

  10. This is my second work, made with FL Studio.. Well, I haven't finished my first work yet, but I suddenly got the inspiration for this one, and I immediately wrote it down!

    It's an arrangement of the Thunder Plains theme from Final Fantasy X in ambient style, or at least, that's the style I want to give to this song.

    The funny thing is that I got the inspiration while I was whistling this song, I realized that a 'whistle version' of it would've been kinda cool, so I tried to make one myself and I managed to arrange it in ambient style.

    The song's not complete yet, I should add something more to make it more tasty , and the ending's missing! (I still haven't figured out a possible ending for the song, actually..)

    There's much work to do but I wanted to post a preview version for it, please leave me some comments! Even bad ones are well accepted, as you might've noticed I'm totally a novice in this field, I need some advices/critics from elders y'know :P

    I prsonally think I should change that whistle synth, also, I need a mute triangle so bad, but I can't find one >_>

    Source:

    Link: http://tindeck.com/listen/vuip

  11. Depending on how picky you are and how into creating your own sounds you are, you could probably make a decent triangle sound with a filtered square or triangle waveform (or both), subtle LP filter closing, short amp decay and mid-sustain/release.

    A muted triangle would just be shorter and more muffled. Could be done with a sample or with the synth suggested above.

    ^I'm gonna try this to make sure.

    Thanks for the advice, anyway, good news! I just found a good open triangle sample, I just have to make a mute triangle by modifying this one, so I'll just have to make it shorter as you told me.. This work can be done on Wavepad, right??

  12. I'm afraid I'm not sure what it is that you're trying to accomplish, could you explain a little more in depth?

    You see, this is what I want to do, and I can simply do it by double clicking the note I want to modify, but when I select more notes and double-click.. the 'Time' proprietes are not editable, so that I can't modify all the notes' duration at the same time, it can be done by clciking at the end of one note and dragging it, I know, but it's not that accurate

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