Thanks for the comments, guys!
Rozovian - yeah, you're right, the piano in All for You could stand to be a bit more humanized. I'm still getting the hang of sequencing piano. It's probably better if I just attempt to play it, and correct as necessary. Unfortunately, I suffer the fate of "stupid fingers".
As for Polychromatic, I've been sitting on this one for well over a year, and I've heard it so many times that I've gotten used to how it sounds. But yeah, the clap definitely stands out, the bass drum fade in seems like it might be a little off, and the pads are definitely on the slow side. On this one, I think I was more concerned with the atmosphere than the structure, and perhaps it suffered slightly for it. Regarding the dynamic range, I think I might be misusing my multiband compressor plugin.
Anyway, I'm off to Tokyo for 3 months, (and I'm not sure if I should revise the one I already submitted while it's in the queue), but as time permits, I'll revisit these tracks and see what happens.