JoePotato28

good advice on the ride cymbal, thanks. and the dissonance was intentional i promise

This is a pretty good composition man, nice work. You made these two songs work well together and there's definitely some kind of narrative to this. I don't really know how to critique it. One thing I can say is, maybe it could be a little shorter. Especially if you're planning on submitting it to OCR as they want mixes that are between 2-7 minutes long

Thanks The ending wasn't exactly intentional, I originally wanted it to just be a fade out. After I heard that feedback though I thought it would be cool to keep it and work with it.

https://app.box.com/s/s8iid64fqtwzz8mxetlf jazzy mix i made back in November the original song: i was pretty liberal with the arrangement. instead of taking the structure of the song and remixing from within, i incorporated bits from the original in a totally different and progressive structure. sorta took it in a totally different direction, a more winter-y direction. like Petalburg City in the winter ya know

http://tindeck.com/listen/rijv I have no intentions on submitting this to OCR, as it far exceeds the mb limit. However, opinions and criticisms are still greatly appreciated!

Hello all. This is my first post here in quite a while, and I would say I've improved quite a bit since my last ReMix i posted here. Anyways, here it is, "Crashing The Party". EDIT: (Newest version with problems pointed out by TheGuitahHeroe fixed) http://tindeck.com/listen/ffgd Criticisms would be greatly appreciated.

So heres a remix i made of the ending theme from Sonic The Hedgehog 2. Its one of my first actually decent remixes. I would still like to improve it though. Made in FL Studio. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ltAfpmxVLvc