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VideoGameManiac
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This is great! I really enjoyed it. Say, can I do a remix of this?
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I was happy and I did chill, happy music, enjoy
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Drumbient? Moar liek Ambium
I gave it a couple of listens, and boy, do I have some criticism for you.
The whole song feels very stale, very static. Even with the main pad breathing in and out, everything else seems quite stiff and mechanical. There isn't a whole lot of dynamics with your drums or leads.
Your piano and flute have no sense of humanization, as well as sounding very loopy. Repeating the same patterns with no variation tends to get dull.
The overall mixing is also flat. I know soundcloud and youtube likes to compress the songs sometimes, but I don't believe that's the case here. There's subtle yet noticeable distortion through-out the track (when the piano comes in @ 1:36, when the kick hits at the beginning of the tune, etc.)
So some quick advice:
- Practice on mixing. Learn some tips and tricks to get the most out of your sounds and space in the mix.
- Work on humanization if you're trying to incorporate live sounds. A little finesse and personalization goes a long way.
- Have variation. You can have patterns that repeat, but you shouldn't have sections that sound the same. Having one-shot sounds can make all the difference.
- Keep at it
thanks for your advice, I really appreciate that!
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Yay for title creativity! And also this is my first try at DnB, hope you enjoy
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Original Titel: Brinstar- Underground Depth from Super Metroid ( you know that game xd )
Its more a remake than a remix but anyway enjoy!
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I had that funny idea of a glove getting revived by some magic dust and playing this song while I was making this song xd Hope you enjoy!
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ty for the review, yea you are right its a little bit too long with not so much content but thats just me because Im not a fan of short tracks xd. Oh and Im just doing those for fun dont really want to go for a submission but thanks for your advice, definitely gonna try to get different percussions.
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This is a little Remix of The Jungle Floor from Super Metroid and its more Original than a remix to be honest, enjoy!
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This is what came into my mind after watching a picture with a lake surrounded by a dark forest
Enjoy!
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So this is basically a simple Deus Ex remix combining the songs from Unatco, NYC Streets, DuClare Chateau and a few seconds of intro.
Its not really special since there arent many changes to the main source but I hope the nostalgia gets u as it got me while I was doing this haha, enjoy!
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awesome! Im so into ambient, great work!
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So this is one of my first tries on rpg music, would like to know what I could improve on this ty!
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haha this soundtrack is so evil! Especially at the part when the guitar starts playing. Sounds very nice, I also dont know what genre it would be, maybe instrumental or industrial?
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still nothing "sigh"
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Very nice sound. I like your combination of different styles
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good job! totally fits the vid
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Overall this is very nice and soothing. I love textures such as this- great job. I would however go back and revisit some of the arpeggiating synth and maybe change the notes to better reflect the chords.
ty, yes I'm going to try to fix the repetitive parts in the future
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A very long song I did during the week and it has to be my best work so far. So guys, enjoy some calm, ambientish sounding music, its like travelling through different parts of dimensions so it might sound repetitive but in my opinion its exactly this what makes it enjoyable but I leave it to you guys I would appreciate your feedback in what I could improve and stuff. So yea, hope you enjoy!
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Hi guys Im new to FL Studio, been messing around with sounds and stuff and this is like the 4th musicI have ever created, I just want to know what you guys think about it and what I could improve, add, remove etc., its not finished because I ran out of idea in the end so it sounds like a loop if I dont change it but oh well enjoy.
Edit: Changed title name and thats my newest Version so far
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sounds amazing, well done!
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thanks for the nice review, its my first vg remix and I appreciate your suggestion
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sounds cool so far!
Dancing Flowers
in Post Your Original Music!
Posted · Edited by VideoGameManiac
This is a short melody that ended up being longer than intended xD
https://soundcloud.com/videogamemaniac/dancing-flowers
why bother clicking on this thread when you dont even listen to the track? :/ Im out of this stupid forum