[super smash bros all star mode remix]

https://soundcloud.com/limberturtle/super-smash-bros-all-stars-remix

was wondering if I could get some feedback pls. The program froze in the middle of working on it so didn't get to fully finish it. Was wondering if its any good, critique, give feedback, id appreciate it

[Snes Fzero Silence remix]

There's some nice sounds and good ideas in here, but you don't seem to know what to do with them. For example, you have a really nice buildup that goes nowhere, just hits a high point at 0:12. You have a nice, sparse, relaxed bit at 0:25. The arp backing in the B-part (0:38) is cool. You just seem to have missed the part about arranging these cool ideas into something that flows well and makes sense to the listener.

Thanks I can never seem to get the song to make sense. Im at a loss but ill keep working on it

UPDATE

https://soundcloud.com/limberturtle/fzero-silences does this sound any better

[Snes Fzero Silence remix]

I Was just wondering if I could get some feedback on the remix im working on.

UPDATE I tried to fix it, does this sound any better? feedback woould be appreciated

https://soundcloud.com/limberturtle/fzero-silences

[Snes Tetris Attack Water stage remix]

https://soundcloud.com/limberturtle/tetris-attack-water-stage-2

I was looking for some feedback so i can finally finish this song. Any help would be appreciated

[SNES Tetris Attack]

https://soundcloud.com/limberturtle/tetris-attack-water-stage

this will be my last remix for a while promise lol. Aby feeedback would be appreciated

[super smash bros all stars]

https://soundcloud.com/limberturtle/ssbb-all-star-remix

hey this is my attempt at a remix for this theme cause it was always my favorite and wished it were longer lol. Any feedback would be appreciated.

[snes tetris attack lunar stage remix]

I again feel like its just too much going on at once or its just missing something that I cant seem to find. Any help would be appreciated

[Tetris Attack Water stage remix]

Hi I was hoping someone could offer me some advice for this remix. It seems like its missing something and I cant figure it out.

please help

[Tetris Attack water stage remix]

This us actually my second attempt at a remix for this song lol.

I was almost done and my computer froze so I ended up with this.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DD7xi935Rcs

any feedback would be appreciated. Also if you could check out my orignal on my channel and compare the two would be sweet but feedback on the one provided would be more than enough lol.

[First remix Super Smash bros Melee Intro]

New link the other one didnt work lol This is my first remix in a long time so it might as well be my first. Im only working with the fl studio demo so it was rushed and didnt want anything to happen to it. Any feedback would be appreciated so I can get better at this.