Thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts, Tim! Here's a newer version of the song:
http://puu.sh/2XJFh.mp3
What's been changed:
-The mixing of just about everything has been tweaked a little bit. Bass is softer, lead/high-range instruments are louder, and the entire song has been boosted ~2 dB (will probably bump this up higher).
-Adjusted a lot of the instruments by a little bit.
-Tempo is now 118 instead of 110, which feels a lot better.
-Added a few tracks - some synthesized choir voices in the intro fill in some gaps, as well as a quiet noise rhythm track.