Hooblah2u2

Hit the Soaps is my next attempt at a dubstep song. I haven't had too much luck in the past but this one seems to have much potential (you gotta understand - I am a total noob still). http://soundcloud.com/hooblah2u2/hit-the-soaps-wip I would love any constructive criticism or advice. I am particularly weak in the area of mastering and balancing. For example I feel the chorus may be somewhat "crowded" but maybe that's just me.

NEW: Updated the song to it's final (I think) version.

Well first off, I am a complete noob. Oh man. Glad I got that off my chest. Here's the rough edit of my remix (sorta) of Ezio's Family from Assassin's Creed 2. I named it Ezio's Passion, but I don't really know why. I have no idea how to master or how to do most things required for a good song, but I decided to give it a try anyways. I started this attempting to emulate the original song, but I ended up adding some things of my own. Is this still considered a remix? UPDATE: Here's the finished song (unless anyone notices any serious flaws). I scavenged and found some higher quality samples, readjusted the volume levels, and added some more sounds in the mix. What do you guys think? I may be over my head, but is this anywhere close to being able to be included in OCRemix's site? http://soundcloud.com/hooblah2u2/ezios-passion