Thank you so much for the feedback, everyone. 
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DarkSim: 
Maybe you could flesh out the arrangement? Please mess around with it if you feel like it. 
JackKieser: 
I make so many mistakes if I play for too long. Gotta practice more. 
Rukunetsu: 
Oh stop it, you. 
G-Mixer: 
Again, longer = more mistakes on my part, I'm afraid.