Shadysoup

Hello! This is a project I started awhile back, then took a break from - I'm keen on continuing it, but I thought I'd ask you friendly fellows here at OCremix for some critique and advice, first. Don't hold back, criticize every little thing ruthlessly! And thanks in advance ^^. https://www.dropbox.com/s/r64z0erb1rivqyh/Aaaha.mp3 There ya go. Hope you enjoy, and more importantly - hope you find things you don't enjoy so I can fix them!