Hey thanks for the feedback!
*scrolls through your post with fear*
Alright so reading back through your post...
I actually HAVE fixed a few of the things you mentioned, but the streaming links are permanent so I just left it. Can't do much about that lol. I should have put it up on some other file hosting site, oh well.
Also, the streaming quality miiiiight be a contributing factor to the overloaded-limit-breaking-awesomeness quality (it's not THAT different, but its not "production quality").
First off... MISSION ACCOMPLISHED! Lol that "white noise" was actually supposed to make people cringe. It made me cringe. And I liked it, it tickled. So I left it.
So a few things:
1. Static. I put it in there on purpose. Wait, did you think I was recording this live? I'm flattered!!! I tried to create a "music-over-a-static-radio environment".... sooooo I don't really know what else to say haha
2. The clipping. Yeah, you got me. I have only made a few ditties on Fruity Loops, I'm still not very well-read on all its features. While it seems elementary to you, I'm not a full-time musician, and this song is the only song I've fully remixed. I'm actually going back into FL Studio right now to fix that now that you've brought that up! This has been helpful!
3. Digital Piano. Yeah it bugs me too. But after about 40 hours of trying to get all the levels, harmonies, and wobbles right, I got very sleepy and didn't wanna spend another 2 or 3 hours working on 200+ individual note velocities (done that before). #ijustwanttosleep
4. The kick. Also a velocity issue. It sounds awesome though.
5. The ending piano. Well, I CAN argue put more effort into its velocities than the piano at 1:12 hahahaha. But as for the simplicity of it... also made it like that on purpose. I tried the compliment harmonies, but it actually sounds better and more "bleak and dismal" with the melody by itself. So, guess that's a matter of opinion.
Well, after reading through that grill, I was relieved to see that you were more bothered by the sound quality (I put very little effort into it), versus the musical complexion. Haha I'm glad you pointed out "Are you trying to win the loudness war or write a remix you like" because it was actually a mixture of both! Duuuuude i LOVED writing this song, and I was crazy excited to get other people to hear it, so I just felt like "YUSS! I'M GOING TO MAKE THIS AS LOUD AS POSSIBLE!"
Btw I produced this with earbuds, not stereo speakers. It sounds awesome with earbuds.
Dayum, I can only IMAGINE what this sounds like on speakers!
You were very helpful! I'm just glad some other human beings are listening to my work. I've been listening to hundreds of songs from OCRemix on my iPod for years now, so I wanted to contribute.