B33J
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Hey man. Go listen to NIN's "Adrift and at Peace" song.
I'd REALLY like to hear some pretty low, wide, synthed bass stuff like what comes in near 1:40, for your song. I think it'd fit pretty well.
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Hey Binster! I'm glad it's released.
Keep up the great work!
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I'd certainly be up for some more collabs too.
Itching to play..
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_SGwDhKTrwU
A tactile sequencer... Just watch the video and drool for one like me.
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Yeah I really like this too! Even if it's just a little no-idea song or whatever, i'd like to hear a finished version.
I might change the hi-hat sound after the breakdown though, but it's got a real good bass/groove sound, yo!
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I kinda second what Zircon says. Make it heavier, more bass.
Also, that songs at that version seems to be too short. Maybe like Pendulum's Slam, you could do a keychange of the melody closer to the end and give in a whole new part. Likewise, have the breakdown stretch out longer.
Hot shtuff yo. I've had this up all day long playin it.
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so long, gay bowser!
HAHAHAHA oh my god i laughed so hard at the title of this thread...
my brother and i would always make that joke of what it sounded like mario said.. Wow dude, kudos for you for typing that! 10 year old jokes coming back are awesome
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Shoot, I'd think that if you submitted it as is, it'd almost get accepted. Of course maybe work on the timing a little bit, but minimalistic piano pieces do pretty well here, I think.
I've had it on repeat for a while now. Very enjoyable.
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My computer already came with a name. >_> Nemesis
But my 3 hard drives names are,
for system stuff: The Stellar Ring
games/media: The Grid
and my external: The Verge
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To be judged right this second.
I think we were all hoping for this to be said instead. >_<
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When the beat first kicked in it really made me think that this song could be a good industrial remix..
The soundscape is a little shocking at the 0:32 second mark because the percussion changes up so much, the low end bass disappears and the synth that plays the main melody that's panned to the right is extremely generic sounding.
My opinion: Keep the hihat sound going past the 0:32 mark and see how it sounds.. Might keep the shock down. Also try panning more of the hard non-backing percussions around more.
Work with a bit more reverb too. Some things seem to be in front or on top of other sounds. As well, some sounds are not loud enough, while a few could stand to be turned down a smidge.
Even though the intro is kinda simple, it still builds up the anticipation a bit. When the :32 hits, it doesn't going any higher.. just hits this kinda plateau. Like it needs more loud screaming synths and the backing percussions need to have more presence, more strength.
The thing at 2:09 sounds like the end of a song.. I don't what you were intending to do with it but just sounds funny
Find more complex synth sounds and try those out...
Try to find a less midi-sounding guitar PLEEEAAASSE!!
And what other people said, production is a big issue. Work the sound levels better, reverb, and plan the soundscape better.
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The ONLY time someone has acknowledged it with me was when I walked into a gas station and the dude behind the counter said "nice shirt". Down here in ole central Georgia.
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When I say "Damn," I think it's obvious to infer that this is the most awful submission in the history of submissions that has ever been submitted by a submitter or group of submitters submitting their submission to the submissions process.
haha..
We also did it submissively, if I might add..
I really can't wait to hear the whole thing either.
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Son of a bitch! My video card is messing up.. I think I have to get a new one.. It's gonna be several days before I can get back online. You guys have fun.
using bro's computer now.
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We're starting to get a FEW more people into the OCR channel.
Don't forget, if you read this, PLEASE join the OCR channel so we can help each other out in the game and shoot the poop!
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I'd be quite pleased to see someone do Opening to Hell in the style of NIN's Eraser. Some good hard industrial drumming would go well with that.
O RLY?
Well I wish I had the studio to make that kinda song. Eraser is one of my favorite songs.... I love that deep, dark, powerful sound. Reason alone won't cut it.
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By the way... There's a "OCRemix" Corp and a "Overclocked Inc." Corp.. Which one are we using? Looks like they're both at the same station..
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Loaded back up with a 7 day free trial i got in email...
Where's da peeps?
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Quuuestion: How updated is your first post? Are those tracks still available?
Track 04 - Between Levels
Track 07 - Shawn's got the Shotgun
Track 09 - Into Sandy's City
Track 28 - Getting Too Tense
Track 30 - Opening To Hell
I could certainly see Opening To Hell sounding like a Nine Inch Nails', A Warm Place, Eraser or Reptile-esque song.
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For those that had no idea who he was, like me...
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*cough*
As for the music itself.. i dunno what else to say besides the ole "get better samples!" line...
Some of these things could use a tiny bit more reverb, maybe.. and better samples on drums.. and maybe make things a bit more paddish..
Of course now after I look at your ID3v2 tag info, i coulda written that poem a little differently.. DOH..
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I was listening to your music for about 2 hours straight on repeat while i wrote this. Feel free to use it or not, rewrite whatever you want, take snippets.. doesn't matter.
from all past memories to now in lifesoon be taken by Death's gnarled scythe
following time's perpetual flow
my grasp on life starts to let go
an endless night, falling, screaming
awaken from my slumber, fighting, dreaming
how am I to handle the ceaseless stress
without my loved one's soft caress?
gone before the moonlight beaming
through my window, flying, fleeing
hope of another breath left my heart
as the waning of my vision seemed to start
the binding of my soul begins to break
torn with the pain that startles me awake
my shouts for a second chance heard by none
for the air in my lungs has since been done
no more movement now
no more sound
and all that ends has ended...
felt good to write that, too.
*NOW A CONTEST* make a music video for WANDERER ON THE OFFENSIVE
in Recruit & Collaborate!
Posted
I has a forum post in a relevant thread.
Looking forward to some good videos!