I'd love some feedback on my round 1 remix from the Castlevania compo (going on right now over at http://ocremix.org/community/topic/42341-castlevania-cacophony-of-incarnation-2016/?page=1)
Any feedback is welcome! You can either post your comments in this thread or on SoundCloud. I plan on submitting this to the OCR judges panel.
Lyrics:
You say love should feel this way
You say love can ease the pain
I fear my choice is unclear
I fear I could disappear
Ruin, sorrow, your love leaves me hollow
In the darkness you won't find me here anymore
Jaded, blinded, your voice drew me in
Our love was misguided but I won't be fooled again
You've become a Vampire
You broke my heart and drank my soul
One day you'll finally meet your fate
In the darkness shadows wait for you
I won't be your victim and my revenge is overdue
You've become a vampire
And now I'm here to vanquish you
This night you'll finally meet your fate