So we finally loaded the project back up and gave it a fresh coat of paint. I think it's a substantial improvement.
OP:
Hey everyone, this is a track my band submitted for judging early June. Since it's likely we won't hear back for several more weeks (months?), I was hoping to gather some feedback so that we can further improve our sound moving forward. As with all of our completed tracks to date, we have used as many live instruments as possible and all solos are improvised.
Source tune: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HidFV5XLugs
original music video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qLvjZOAmmO4