a trancy song

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hey heres a wip of a trance like song ive been working on

http://www.myspace.com/soundforumusik

its called:

warning: dont listen to this song if on medication

tell me what you think!

[Synius]

Not bad; I like the intro; the synth there sounds a tad cheesy as does the bass synth that comes in around :15. The bass synth sounds overcompressed but that could just be Myspace. There are some EQ problems here and there... especially that kick; I feel like it needs to be bassier. The percussion samples sound extremely familiar (vipzone, perhaps?) and the snare... needs quite a bit, heh. The song's structure is really not bad but needs a LOT more melodic progression; for the most part it stays monotone. It was a bit difficult to find a climax or anything of the sort. But again, just work some more with it, and you'll get better over time. =D