BlackPanther Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 So after this got rejected and I decided to go through with refining this and having the time to do so, I got some help from the wip irc channel and a few veterans. Some of you who've heard this already may remember the previous version and will be able to point out the big differences. So uh here it is Source Original Revised I decided to put the original up there for those who haven't heard the original. So if there are still some issues that need to be fixed please let me know because I plan for this one to get YES'ed this time. EDITS:After listening to what Radiowar and a few others said,I upped the ocataves on those synths so it should be less cluttering and made some changes to a few more things... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiowar Posted December 21, 2008 Share Posted December 21, 2008 There's a lot going on in the middle section and it comes off sounding very cluttered and more dissonant than it probably should. Not helped by the fact that the bass is too loud. Other than that it seems pretty solid to me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackPanther Posted December 22, 2008 Author Share Posted December 22, 2008 Hmm I really do like that bass where it is lol. I guess it's just me and growing up with hip hop music xD. I'm gonna look into the other stuff as well. Thanks for listenin and thanks for the feedback =). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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