wip untitled artist - carrie's song version i

[Benjamin Briggs]

I don't know what name I'm going to have this musical endeavor published under, help me think of something that's short and sweet

it's me on all the guitar parts and me doing all the singing... fake drums, fake bass, fake synth, slight pitch correction on lead vox, heavy pitch correction on backup vox, lots of effects on everything

um... I realize the lyrics are prrrrrrretty fucking bad, but I also realize that at least 12 females will love them and that's good enough for me to record and sell for, that's right, real money

hopefully this work will develop quickly, but feedback is always appreciated thx

http://www.tindeck.com/audio/file/bhnc-goodbye.mp3

renamed it "goodbye", it's essentially finished

[Tex]

Maybe if you make the file AVAILABLE, I can think of a name for it.

[Benjamin Briggs]

yeah sorry that's edited sir

I'm pretty baked atm

[Tex]

This is not a bad song. Finish it and get some $$$ for it.

[Benjamin Briggs]

thanks man will do

[sgx]

This is pretty yummy. I like it a lot. You got more like that? Planning on making more?

As for feedback:

- Is the structure final? It's kind of put together weird - I think it would work better in a more traditional pop/rock song structure.

- Don't know if I like the bit crunching on the backup vox

- umm that's it. yay

[Benjamin Briggs]

yes I plan to have a whole album full of songs similar to this in 3 months

this one's done, basically... structurally finished, needs mixing work. consider it a wip until the release of the album. I am still totally open to modifying the piece, I just need to move along with the writing process

http://www.tindeck.com/audio/file/bhnc-goodbye.mp3

renamed the track "goodbye", I'm started on the next track already

more to come, then