Protricity Posted October 29, 2003 Posted October 29, 2003 Hello. I'm assuming your a judge, since your, well, in the judges forum....I submitted this long ago. I got the confirmation email and all, but I havent heard about it since then. Its "breezy" from FFVII. It would be awesome if you could help me out, and maybe bring it into OCR's attention. Thanks, -nate
Vig Posted October 29, 2003 Posted October 29, 2003 ok the first two minutes has me interested...proficient guitar playing, maybe a tiny bit out of tune in a place or two, and there are a few unintentional mutes, but nothing too bad. i'm hopeful. ah! what happened? this middle segment starting from 2:something is just a mess. there's clipping all over the place, the transition is akward, the rhythm guitar is too dry. the solo is a huge mess. bad notes all over the place, absolutely no attention is paid to rhythms. this is a rock segment, there should be drums and bass. either do the middle segment right, or drop it completely and go somewhere else for escalation. NO
Protricity Posted October 29, 2003 Author Posted October 29, 2003 vig is right. The middle section is in some need of bass and a drumset going. There is indeed a lot of off in the middle section. As for the rest of the song, it is well played but note for note with the original prettymuch entirely. Work on melodic variation, less off notes in the middle, and get a drumset even if its not real NO
Malcos Posted October 30, 2003 Posted October 30, 2003 I agree with what has already been said. I think there generally needs to be more to this mix. Some drums and bass would be really good to add to this (just to reiterate!) NO At the moment, not engaging enough.
Digital Coma Posted November 6, 2003 Posted November 6, 2003 How do two minutes of guitar strumming go by without anything happening? Movement without development. This is just extremely messy from start to finish with zero arrangement value. Guitar know-how does not a mix make. NO
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