Prasa_U. Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 So I'm working on kind of a "remake" of this tune. I don't know if I'll submit it to OCR since I'm not currently focusing too much on rearrangement, but maybe in the future. Here's the beginning, the general sound I'm going for. http://omohide.com/corridor1.mp3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pander Posted October 10, 2009 Share Posted October 10, 2009 So I'm working on kind of a "remake" of this tune. I don't know if I'll submit it to OCR since I'm not currently focusing too much on rearrangement, but maybe in the future.Here's the beginning, the general sound I'm going for. http://omohide.com/corridor1.mp3 I couldn't tell if you were going for a more African or Asian tone with this remix. The strongest part is the very high quality samples (nice flute) and well-mixed arrangement of the background. The weakest is obviously the note-for-note matching of the melody, which barring some interpretive elements later in the song would preclude it from passing OCR muster. I dig it, but with this song before over-remixed as it is, it needs more to stand out. Pretty. (edit: Maybe I should read the part where you mention you aren't focused on arrangement. Nice job me. If you're mostly concerned about atmosphere and sound, I like where you're going a LOT. You could go a lot of directions from where you're at, actually, any idea?) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prasa_U. Posted October 11, 2009 Author Share Posted October 11, 2009 More: http://omohide.com/corridor2.mp3 Re: Pander. I don't know if I was really going for any specific tone other than the organic sounding one I had in my head. I did include some tabla-aided percussion to recall the Hindu sounds of the original. My intent when starting was just to bring the piece out in the way it always did it my head, but I may consider adding a more personal touch to the arrangement and submitting it to OCR. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meteo Xavier Posted October 11, 2009 Share Posted October 11, 2009 It sounds like a really good start, but the instrument placement needs some work, IMO. I tend to visualize music and right now its kinda Picasso-ish, if that makes any sense. It might just be me. Also that pad needs some smoothing out. It crests and falls in a weird way. Flute could use some smoothing out too, but it's ok as is. Send me a copy when you fix and finish it - I'd definitely love to have this in my collection. 7.9/10 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prasa_U. Posted October 14, 2009 Author Share Posted October 14, 2009 Here it is: http://www.omohide.com/music/Corridor%20of%20Time%20(www.omohide.com).mp3 In the end I just left it more as my personal "remake" rather than an OCR-style rearrangement. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catharsis Posted October 19, 2009 Share Posted October 19, 2009 It sound like the flute is trying to do too much in a couple places, like 1:52. Also, 5:20 might be a little long for this song. Those two things aside, I really like this. Maybe a little (just a little) harder hitting drums? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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