Draconiator Posted October 10, 2009 Share Posted October 10, 2009 YouTube cut out the stereo at places, but here's what I've been working on in the ol' forge today. Can you review this please? Thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pope Posted November 19, 2009 Share Posted November 19, 2009 While I listen to a lot of electronic music, I do not create it, so just take this for what it's worth to you. I liked the melody you brought in at 1:56. I didn't like that I kept hearing it for the remainder of the song. To put it bluntly: I think the song is boring. I would like more variety in pretty much everything, especially with it being 7+ minutes. The beat is basically the same throughout, as is the melody. You did do a couple of drop out things, but rather than offering a refreshing change in the music, and alleviating the monotony, it simply postponed more if it. I don't mean for that to sound harsh. It is by no means a horrible song. It's not painful to listen to. It's just not interesting to me. Maybe practice a little on creating some shorter songs with at least 2-3 very distinct parts to them? Just an idea. But if that's not what you want to do, then by all means don't. It's your art just as much as mine is mine, and I'm sure as hell not going to change the way I do things for some random dude on the internet who didn't like my song. Keep at it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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