A new song "Tears in the Rain" 80s-90s slow rock ballad

[Mithius]

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Hi everyone, Hi brothers,long time no post, long time not been around. I hope you all are okay keeping all your selfs well.

Of late everything I do,seems broken into millions of pieces into a million of nothings.

This 80s-90s slow rock ballad was composed in november It is called" Tears in the rain". I never really have done much vocal music let alone singing before and I am not a singer of any kind so the vocals are not that well done at all. One has to bear it I guess but I hope the lyrics get across.

I was influenced in one scene, with some of the words near the end when he dies in bladerunner the movie, where he says "all those moments will be lost in time, like tears in the rain". I do not really know what those words in bladerunner or my lyrics really mean I guess it is ones own interpretation.

These are the lyrics to the song.

Life full of hope,

Dreams into wine,

With city folks.

Flows down to meet,

Rivers that wind,

Onto the streets.

At dusk smoke on the rise,

On up ahead,

Burning ones eyes.

Streets crowded again,

More and more,

Another dead end.

No where to fly,

No where go,

No broken wings, have got one home,

Nothing to claim in oneself,

Just another Isolated cell.

Here tonight,

Once one could see the horizon light,

Those memories gone are lost in time,

Like tears that fall in the rain.

Here tonight,

One could wait for a thousand years,

One could cry a thousand tears,

But in the rain those tears just disappear.

http://www.mediafire.com/file/5g0wm1ykgma/Mastered tears in the rain mp3 256K.mp3

Everyone take care, best regards and peace out.

[lewa]

Very nice! Music is very well done. Voice is kinda...unnecessarily grainy, no offense. The poetry is nice, but the voice does not seem to entirely match the emotion. My opinion though!

Wow, nice guitar solo. Great song ending. Love how it's just instrumental for a little while. Very pleasant. Loved it.